T1-23: Thriller Opening 2010/11
Wednesday 23 March 2011
Wednesday 16 March 2011
Identity - Mary Pegasiou
Monday 14 March 2011
Roughcut feedback
We received some feedback on our roughcut to add sound to different perspectives to make it easier to follow. als to edit one of the scenes in two to give more time between the two people in the scene.
How else might you advertise your film (apart from in a cinema)
we would advertise our film by utilising adverts in magazines, posters in bus shelters, tv and radio.
Thursday 10 March 2011
Monday 7 March 2011
how we are going to use our feedback
We are going to take into consideration these constructive criticisms given by our classmates. We will give more indications on the development of our thriller from the planning stages to the thriller opening scene. Previously we were unaware of the issue and having this brought to our attention will help us to improve our blog.
Furthermore we will add more technical language and overall detail (photo's, captions to compliment other media) to make the blog more informative and user friendly.
We have also decided to use a background image for our blog to make it more appealing to read and more appropriate to the thriller theme.
We will add a foreign thriller analysis to make the blog complete.
Furthermore we will add more technical language and overall detail (photo's, captions to compliment other media) to make the blog more informative and user friendly.
We have also decided to use a background image for our blog to make it more appealing to read and more appropriate to the thriller theme.
We will add a foreign thriller analysis to make the blog complete.
Blog Assessment
Variety of Relevant Blog Posts
Relevant posts
- need to add some more analysis of foreign thriler openings
- Could add a few more posts
Appropriate Visual Aids
- Good use of video clips/pictures when needed
- More writing/captions to go with the photos
- Good use of video clip to give us an idea of how they are going to put together their thriller. Good use of - picture to show planning
- Good visuals
Appropriate use of technical vocabulary
- Yes
- Kind of Mentions protagonist/antagonist.
Quality of posts: content explanations and clarity
- More detail needed
- Have detailed analysis of ideas and reasons for using it
- Very detailed and clear
- Good detail but could use more technical language in explanations
Development
- does go through stages of what they have done but could give more info on their process of their thriller opening
- Needed to be more
- "Need more"
Relevant posts
- need to add some more analysis of foreign thriler openings
- Could add a few more posts
Appropriate Visual Aids
- Good use of video clips/pictures when needed
- More writing/captions to go with the photos
- Good use of video clip to give us an idea of how they are going to put together their thriller. Good use of - picture to show planning
- Good visuals
Appropriate use of technical vocabulary
- Yes
- Kind of Mentions protagonist/antagonist.
Quality of posts: content explanations and clarity
- More detail needed
- Have detailed analysis of ideas and reasons for using it
- Very detailed and clear
- Good detail but could use more technical language in explanations
Development
- does go through stages of what they have done but could give more info on their process of their thriller opening
- Needed to be more
- "Need more"
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